上个周末给齐齐从图书馆借了本书，是一个小朋友在参观完动物园后画了一本“drawing book“。读完后齐齐受了启发，这两天非常热衷于订起几页纸来，在上面涂鸦一番，然后口述着让我把画面描述出来。齐齐做的第一本书就是说的她去电影世界的过程。涂鸦的水平实在不敢恭维，不过齐齐爸爸说英文水平比他高了，哈哈。把徐诺小朋友的英文版电影世界游记登录上来。需要说明的是，这些文字中我修改或者建议的不超过10个单词，可都是徐诺小朋友的语言奥！

 

Title: From Movie World (By Gloria Xu & Susan Zhang)

注：齐齐说因为我帮她写下来，也做出了贡献，所以很大方的同意把我的名字也属上了。

 

This is our house. Today we go to Movie World. The wheather is good. Mummy didn't come because mummy had a baby in her tummy. Grandparents didn't come either because that was too scary for them. - 注：画的是远处一座小房子，然后有一条长长的路从房子那儿延伸出去。

 

This is the car park and the ticket house. Inside the house is a person who sell the ticket. We went out of our car to buy a ticket. - 注：画的是一座小房子，窗户里露出一个小脑袋，旁边横七竖八的停着几辆车。

 

Then we went to see the car race. One of the car went on the roof and made a big pile of fire. At that time, we feel very hot. - 注：画的是两排小人，一个梯子，还有一辆貌似大黄蜂的车。

 

Then we went to Scooby-Doo tunnel and inside the tunnel was a scary beast-ride. We went up and down. It was very scary. - 注：画的是一座房子里有条隧道，一个洞口，一个小人，还有一个小梯子一样的东西。

 

Then we went to the dancing girl show. One of the dancing girl poke her bottom at all of the audience there. - 注：画了两个小人，一个门上有个牌子，写着“Dancing Girl Show". 后面一句话我没听懂，不知道她想说什么意思，也不知道词用得对不对。

 

Then we went to lunch. We ate hamburge and chips and some fishes. - 注：画了一座房子，房子外面一张桌子，两个光头小人坐在桌子边，桌子上有一个盘子放了一些食物。

 

Then we saw a big volcano ride. It gave us a big splash. Me and dady got very wet and same is raining there. - 注：画了一座很高的山，一个长梯从山顶下来，梯子上有一个小船，船上有6个小人。后一句话她想说这个时候也下起雨来，我觉得语句不通顺，不过也没有改。

 

Then we went to the Shrek Movie. During the movie, it was very scary and we felt us riding on a horse. At last, the curtain was closed. - 注：画了三排小人，面前是一片红色的“幕布”。

 

Then we went back to the car park. And we hopped on our car and drove away, all the way to our house. - 注：画的是远处一条路，一直通到近处的一座房子，应该是我们家吧。